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"Entropy"

Posted: 18 Jan 2011, 02:35
by zoupzuop2
...it's not my best song. It's not the one for which I'll be remembered. But I felt I had to finish it, at least for a sense of closure. Entropy is a darker tale of uncertainty, written at a point in my life when I was least certain of my future.

http://odysseymusic.bandcamp.com/album/entropy

Re: "Entropy"

Posted: 18 Jan 2011, 22:51
by Vadim
To me, THIS IS your best song.....( you got me in your corner with this one...)..

Posted: 18 Jan 2011, 23:08
by the_ditz
The song definitely expresses some strong emotions, and I can feel them coming through the melodies and lyrics - but for me, it falls short as a "wow" track. Still nice to hear as a contrast to your more "showy" tracks ;)

Posted: 19 Jan 2011, 02:53
by Lebon14
For me, not as positive as the other. It was good up to the first vocals. The vocals are WAY too loud and totally "mute" the soundworld. Sorry.

Posted: 30 Jan 2011, 02:39
by Shinraikan
I've been meaning to remix an Odyssey track for a while, so here ya go!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zIZTyYw1CG0

Posted: 30 Jan 2011, 14:53
by Densetsu13
I like this remix quite a bit! Great job to both of you.

The only criticism I have is that the a-melo's vocals need to be worked on more. It sounds as if Travis is trying to hit notes below his vocal range...

Otherwise, a very nice melancholic composition Travis. :)