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Posted: 23 Sep 2013, 18:04
by eXtaticus
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Posted: 23 Sep 2013, 18:09
by Bore
Wow I really love the synths. The track itself is also really effective, maybe a bit too warped sounding at times but otherwise a great tune!

Posted: 23 Sep 2013, 19:04
by Akira
Man, that's awesome! I love this track :)

Posted: 23 Sep 2013, 21:29
by Lebon14
Plus:
- Amazing melody; addictive
- Very good vocals, amazing eve.
- Inclusion of chiptune at the end; like in "Wonderland" by Idris.
- Catchy riff!

Minus:
- Inexistant Intro.

9.5/10

EDIT

Do you have cover art for your single?

Posted: 24 Sep 2013, 05:27
by drnrg
very good song. Why didn't you upload the extended version? I wanted to hear an awesome intro and break to go along with the track.

Synths riff is catchy as fuck. I also like that little sound effect going onin the backround throughout the song. Was that what Bore refers to as warped? I don't know, but I like it.

What it does need is female backup. This is so absent in todays Eurobeat and I wish it wasn't because it adds power to vocalists.

I don't know who Olly Winters is. He sounds a bit like the guy who sings for Breath Carolina or a similair pop rock group. Nice vocals. Safe Sounding. perfect pronouncation. These are all pluses, but For me as a listener; I like Vocalists who really have an agressive tone or some kinda accent. Something that really makes them stand out above the rest. Think Gianni Corraini, Gino Caria, Nick Festari, Nando Bonini , Claudio Magnani , Dave Rodgers.

Olly is easy on the ears. Now a days people seem to crave that more than a certain quirkiness in vocals that was most evident in the 80's. I grew up in the 80's and got used to the idea that all vocals should sound very different from others. My favourite vocalists off all TIME is Ric Ocasek from the Cars. Look him up, so you understand my preferences in vocals and why?

Like I said; Olly is easy on the ears and you should get a positive response all around.

All in all a great effort, but try adding some female backup as an alternative just to try it out.

I also would like to see the cover art