Wow, thank you very much everybody for taking the time to listen to my song and commenting constructively on it. This is really what I was hoping for, so I truly appreciate it.
I'll try to go through these in order.
KoolKool:
KoolKool wrote:try to applied some effects like reverb,delay for some sounds
I did!
KoolKool wrote:have you tried my synth1 bank?
Yes, I used it on this track.
KoolKool wrote:...more like re-arrange whole track,not limited from original...
I have to say that if you listened to the original song (there are actually two versions) and then listened to my version, the only similarity is the vocal part. Everything else is original (the structure, arrangement, new melodies, altered harmony, etc...)
Lebon14:
Lebon14 wrote:I think it's pretty good, imo, for what it is.
Thanks for the comment. I intended for the track to sound as eurobeaty as possible - I wasn't trying to reinvent the genre! It was a good learning exercise
eXtaticus:
eXtaticus wrote:I suggest layering up multiple synths for riffs, because it just gives it a thicker sound, and helps the riff differentiate itself from the background synths in the verses and choruses. At the moment, it sounds a touch lifeless; there's not enough "punch".
As KoolKool recognises, I did layer the synth parts; I recognise the importance of this. I'll agree with you that it lacks some punch. I think a lot of it has to do with the general mixing (equalisation, compression, etc) of the track. This is an area I need to improve in.
You also mentioned about the kick drum. I found it really hard to recreate the typical eurobeat kick drum. In fact, I think the drums are the hardest thing for me to "get". I think I can recreate most aspects of eurobeat fairly well, but I'm struggling with the drums! More help here is needed!
I really appreciate the general advice about mixing and mastering. I will refer back to this when I work on my next track.
eXtaticus wrote:Overall, pretty sweet, and I actually like the melodies that you added yourself.
Thank you for noticing this. I wrote original melodies and in some sections changed the harmony (chord progression) of the original song.
eXtaticus wrote:Just out of curiosity, what software/plugins do you use?
This track was made in Ableton Live. The only external plugin I used was Synth1.