SEB LYRIC CONTEST!

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SEB LYRIC CONTEST!

Post by aXu » 26 Sep 2005, 13:23

Okay, Like Mr. Newfield said in other topic, i think it's an hell of an good idea!

Newfield said:
What do you think about setting an "eurobeat from the fans" contest??!!

the best song will be produced for SEB !!!
So, everybody who is intrested in writing lyrics, post your lyrics!
Mr. Newfield will choose the winner if he wants, or we can decide by votes.

Contest ends at 20th of October 2005 if everybody is okay with that?
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Post by Jion » 26 Sep 2005, 19:37

Like A Thief In The Night By Jion

1
When I cannot begin; to describe my emotion
That is when I know that you deserve all of my devotion
Can’t begin to describe; what it is I feel inside
Can’t begin to show how it feels and how you make it flow

Chorus
Made out like a thief in the night
When you said you love me… when you said you need me
Made out like a thief in the night
Cause your hearts my desire; you light my fire
Just made out like a thief in the night
When you said you’d kiss me… when you said you’d be with me
I made out like a thief in the night
Cause your feeling is my desire… and I want you tonight...

2
Your body’s like a temple; housing my soul inside
When I feel your lips on mine; I know I’ll make it through the night
When we are apart; it breaks down my lonely heart
I look to the sun straight to the sky; I won’t stop till I found my prize

Chorus

Post Chorus
Here my heart goes on this path
Will I have the strength to last?
Or shall I just be your past?

1, Chorus, 2, Chorus, Post Chorus, Chorus






Once More Baby by Jion

Woah oh Woah oh!
Come on once more!
'Cause here we go!

1
On the road again waiting for that feeling (Woah oh!)
Come on take me from the blight
Feelin' quite a shock like pullin' on a trigger (Bang!)
Come on let's race baby all the night
You're next to me you seem ready to go
But are you really ready to flee? (Woah no no no)
I look into your eyes; I see temerity
But hold my hand 'cause we're gonna be (3 2 1 Go!)

Chorus:
Once more baby (Come on!)
We're gonna keep on movin'
You've got a chance (Woah oh Woah oh!)
To never stop this feelin'
Come on baby (Lets go!)
Can you feel my rhythm of love?
Don't you stop now (Go!)
(repeat chorus)
Come on baby give it to me one more time (3, 2, 1 Just go!)

2
You hold on so tight cause you feel excitement (Oh yeah!)
Oh go we're on this race
Feelin' such emotion; like an phoenix risin' (Risin' Baby!)
we're gonna fly away from this place
You're next to me you seem ready to go
But are you really ready to flee? (Woah no no no)
I look into your eyes; I see temerity
But hold my hand 'cause we're gonna be (3 2 1 Go!)

Chorus

Woah oh Woah oh! Come on once more! (Lets go!)

Chorusx2





Don’t Leave Me Alone Tonite by Jion

1
Why are you leaving baby
Why don’t you stay
You take my feelings darling
As you go away
I am failing to see now
Don’t understand
Why after so much happiness
I cannot be your man

Pre-Chorus 1
Now I am crying, I'm down on the floor...
Beggin’ that darling you just come right through the door

Chorus
Don’t leave me alone tonite...
Don’t let me go
We were meant forever honey, come on open the door
Don’t Leave me alone tonite
There goes my flow
There goes my victory, it’s falling like the snow... alone tonite

2
Was it... something I said?
Please tell me now
Come now baby let me figure what made us all fall down

Pre-Chorus 2
I’m still crying, Im still on the floor
Trying to figure out, why won’t you open the door...

Chorus
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Post by clubraf » 27 Sep 2005, 01:30

Interspace Lady - By Tempest Tomorrow

There is no time to stop,
No time to stop that clock
See the moon, see the moon, we'll blast past it before high noon
Gotta be crazy, innocent lady, and take this flight into the next light
To see straight ahead, you won't need to find any white knight
Only follow the dream that's going to be a nonstop flight
Understand that this was the only plan
Tomorrow will be a new day but only if we can break away

Interspace lady, driving me crazy
I wanna go, I wanna go, I want to feel your emotions through the night!
Interspace lady, driving me crazy
We'll take off at twilight, it's going to be our highlight

Need to groove, need to groove, no need to disaprove
Setting off onto the the road, it's more than just an new area code
Outdoing this power would only cause a rush hour
Open this show, no need to say no
Only walk on past head to toe and say hello
Believing in this power; we'll make it into the starlight
Solely with the wind will be able to make our wild style
To escape this land and make this all worthwile

Interspace lady, driving me crazy
I wanna go, I wanna go, I want to feel your emotions through the night
Interspace lady, driving me crazy
We'll take off at twilight, it's going to be our highlight


Countdown - By Tempest Tomorrow

Count--down!
Count--down!
5-4-3-2-1!!!

I seen seven thousand cities- and I've been to seven thousand clubs
But tonight nothing has prepared me for what will come
This burning fire will erupt into a supernova
Assault me with your love and desire
If you walk away, it would break my heart
Take me to your heart at full speed
I'll steer you clear of danger when you call out
Call out my name, and I'll show you my soul

This night will be a countdown
Burning energy will be the key
This night will be a countdown
The countdown to your heart

My magic without you would be tragic
Supernatural satisfaction
I thought this would be simple, but I was wrong
To win your kindness I need to be strong
A daydream that I could not perceive
Not being able to see you tomorrow would surely be my undoing
Stay with me and I know I can stay
No longer being a traveller in this mad land

This night will be a countdown
Burning energy will be the key
This night will be a countdown
The countdown to your heart

This night will be a countdown
Burning energy will be the key
This night will be a countdown
The countdown to your heart
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Post by Sadie » 27 Sep 2005, 01:43

I write songs quite a lot, but I wrote this one today, so I thought I'd post it. I'll probably add more at a later time!
I wrote this with the general Eurobeat song layout and themes. So, it follows pretty much the same outline as other Eurobeat songs.

Your Doctor by Sadie [me]
- I wrote this with the idea of Fernando Bonini as Mako singing it.

Verse 1:
Hey there honey!
You my new lover?
How lucky am I baby,
Why don't we get to work together?!

Bridge:
Sit down, relax; don't worry sweety!
We can take on the fire; I'm burnin'
Your body heat fills me with delight,
We can play games like this all the night!

Chorus:
I'm your doctor; aren't you my patient?
Returning to the old times of "doctor and the medic"
I'm your doctor honey, I'll make sure you think I'm funny
Common, baby, let me get you.... (Burn me!)

Verse 2:
Time's ticking by,
Are ya ready to fly?
Without your "love", I feel like I'll die!
Don't you want to make me cry?

Bridge
Chorus (2x)
Verse 2
Bridge
Chorus (2x)

----> Note
I wrote this from a male perspective.... and it felt odd. I owe thanks to a friend of mine at school for his, well, "perspective".... if you want to call it that.
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lyrics

Post by newfield » 27 Sep 2005, 08:05

Wow!! what did I started??you guys all songwriters!!!

could be nice to hear a musical demo to figure out in the best way,just like Mikaeru did.
I suggest the lyrics not protected by copyrights to be sent in my private box coz web is full of thieves!!!

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Post by aXu » 27 Sep 2005, 11:59

maybe i should participate on this too, need to think some lyrics :wink:
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Re: lyrics

Post by Pol NRG » 27 Sep 2005, 12:13

newfield wrote:Wow!! what did I started??you guys all songwriters!!!

could be nice to hear a musical demo to figure out in the best way,just like Mikaeru did.
I suggest the lyrics not protected by copyrights to be sent in my private box coz web is full of thieves!!!
Hi Laurent,

I have always wanted to compose a song but I never learned music so my only tool in order to do nice melodies is my imagination...

Do you can suggest us a software ?
:roll:

ciao,
Pol :wink:
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Post by RnJ4Me » 27 Sep 2005, 13:06

Wow, I will be certain to come back here and try my luck! Writing lyrics, that'll be something p.p.

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Post by Nine » 28 Sep 2005, 11:07

GREAT IDEA! I've submitted my entry in a PM to newfield! =)
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RECORDING

Post by newfield » 28 Sep 2005, 12:50

If you're not a pro,the cheap and fast way to record a new song is the D.R.S.C.S.
Dave Rodgers Self Cloning System.
A karaoke system is top gear,otherway you can use 2 decks to achieve it.
Play an instrumental version song on tape A.(AbeatC songs are very good coz chords progression seems to repeat on many tracks).
Sing new melody and words over it.
Record everything on tape B.

If you don't own a karaoke system,use a tape or cd player to play the song in your hi-fi system.Tape A.
Put a tape recorder close to the monitor,can be portable but need a built-in microphone,and sing facing it.This one(Tape B) will record both your voice and the backing track,low -fi but better than nothing.
This used to be my first recording system in the early 80's.
Lucky guys with a Mac can use Garage band software,it's cool.

C U 4 lesson n°2!!

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Re: RECORDING

Post by Mikaeru » 28 Sep 2005, 15:08

newfield wrote:If you're not a pro,the cheap and fast way to record a new song is the D.R.S.C.S.
Dave Rodgers Self Cloning System.
Ouch, that's just mean. :P

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Re: RECORDING

Post by Sadie » 28 Sep 2005, 19:30

newfield wrote:If you're not a pro,the cheap and fast way to record a new song is the D.R.S.C.S.
Dave Rodgers Self Cloning System.
....haha! I adore Gincarlo's work (so don't get me wrong!), but I must agree, some isn't too original....
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Re: RECORDING

Post by Mikaeru » 28 Sep 2005, 21:24

Sadie wrote:
newfield wrote:If you're not a pro,the cheap and fast way to record a new song is the D.R.S.C.S.
Dave Rodgers Self Cloning System.
....haha! I adore Gincarlo's work (so don't get me wrong!), but I must agree, some isn't too original....
Well, considering when his output at his peak was nearly two whole songs completed in a week, one can give a *little* leeway.

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Post by Ace! » 29 Sep 2005, 01:46

I'm gonna write something... if i can write poetry, i can write an Eurobeat Lyric...

I Wanna feel your love Tonight (Base: Nuage - I'm Gonna Dance for You)
Written by Dino Barrera [Ace!].
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[Intro]
So you say i'm careless
*give me all your tenderness*
Wanna be my feelings now?
I Love You!

[Melo-A 1st version]
The snow falls around us.
It feels so cold over here.
I can't understand you.
I'm freezing myself
in a world of sadness.

[Melo-B]
So you say i'm careless.
*give me all your tenderness*
Wanna be my feelings now?
I Love You! You know it!

[Sabi]
I Wanna feel your love Tonight.
Being one with you my love.
For the rest of my life
Wanna be my girl?
That is the spirit. Give me a kiss.

I Wanna feel your love Tonight.
Don't leave me honey.
You know what I feel.
You can be with me.
Give me your love and kiss me again.

[Melo-A 2nd version]
My body still is shaking.
I don't want to be frozen.
I need your love right now
or i'm gonna die in a couple of minutes.

[Repeat Melo-B]

[Repeat Sabi]

[Repeat Melo-A]

[Repeat Melo-B]

[Repeat Sabi]

[Last Phrase]
I Wanna feel your love Tonight.
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Post by Mikaeru » 01 Oct 2005, 03:45

New entry! (But don't forget http://forum.eurobeat-prime.com/viewtop ... =4316#4316 for Laura - Living in a Fairytale and Laura & Mikaeru - Flying Away

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Oni - Cars & Rock & Roll

Go to Automesse,
See the wild cars.
All the pretty girls,
Strike a pretty pose.
Goin' to Japan,
Land of Risin' Sun.
Hear the roar of cars,
Shining under stars.

Now - We see the show.
Now - We got to go.
Now - We're in the know.
Osaka Automesse in all my dreams.

Cars & Rock & Roll
Turbo engine roll
Solid steel machine

Go to Automesse,
Ultimate car show.
Models of my dreams,
Driving in my heart.
Racin' mean machine,
Speeds I never seen.
Nitroglycerine,
It's my driving dream.

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